love it but I got error messages on the first and third section. Saying something about Harlowe Macros use a different syntax to twine 1 it happen in another area to idk if its just me but check it out but other than that great game. -Elizabeth
I really enjoyed the story and the ending, and agree with prior comments that the game could really benefit from some visuals. I also feel like, for the length of the game and the amount of choices the player can make, the actual direction of the story is quite linear. I think in a more linear game like this the player would benefit from more visuals to keep them engaged. Overall this was very fun and the characters are really interesting and fun to engage with.
I enjoyed this game, and was surprised by how long it was. I think it would benefit from visuals, but with a game this long I can see why you chose not to. I think it could use some more styling, possibly tying the vampire theme in with reds or something.
The story so far is great, reminds me of the duel cops shows one really happy one and the other one really serious. its great so far. Will you add artwork just curious.-Elizabeth
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The writing is so so good and it was a very fun experience! I agree some visuals would be nice but the game turned out great.
impressed with how much writing there is. Would benefit from some art.
love it but I got error messages on the first and third section. Saying something about Harlowe Macros use a different syntax to twine 1 it happen in another area to idk if its just me but check it out but other than that great game. -Elizabeth
I really enjoyed the story and the ending, and agree with prior comments that the game could really benefit from some visuals. I also feel like, for the length of the game and the amount of choices the player can make, the actual direction of the story is quite linear. I think in a more linear game like this the player would benefit from more visuals to keep them engaged. Overall this was very fun and the characters are really interesting and fun to engage with.
I enjoyed this game, and was surprised by how long it was. I think it would benefit from visuals, but with a game this long I can see why you chose not to. I think it could use some more styling, possibly tying the vampire theme in with reds or something.
I really enjoy your prose. Clear, precise phrases, with no extra fluff. I think what this needs now is some visuals. Good job!
The story so far is great, reminds me of the duel cops shows one really happy one and the other one really serious. its great so far. Will you add artwork just curious.-Elizabeth